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Ten Little Deviants

Ten little deviants, all online,
One went invisible, and then there were nine.

Nine little deviants, staying up very late,
One missed a deadline, and then there were eight.

Eight little deviants, cosplaying as Britain,
One found a new fandom, and then there were seven.

Seven little deviants, writing about the River Styx,
One got published, and then there were six.

Six little deviants, having trouble with their hard-drive,
One crashed, and then there were five.

Five little deviants, looking for more,
One got himself banned, and then there were four.

Four little deviants, asking for points you see,
One got a Premium Membership, and then there were three.

Three little deviants, all in a chatroom,
One found a new RP, and then there were two.

Two little deviants, went outside to see the sun,
One got bored, and then there was one.

One little deviant, staring at his screen alone,
Closed their laptop, and then there were none.
EDIT: HOLY FREAKING CRAP YOU GUYS!! Really?! A DD! I really couldn't believe it! Over 700 feedback messages at the end of the day! It's almost kinda weird, seeing as I won't be posted Original stuff on this account anymore, yet it has all the attention now...
ANYWAY, THANK YOU GUYS SO MUCH, I LOVE YA ALL~!~

Can also be called "Ten Little DeviantART Members".
Got this ideas while in a chatroom. People kept leaving, and I remember a game I played (modeled after a book), called "And Then There Were None" (written by Agatha Christie). I decided to come up with a same style poem, but for dA (I did something similar for "Freaking the Mundanes", but for cosplayers).

Original Poem is called Ten Little Injuns, and more info can be found here: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ten_Litt…
Ten Little Cosplayers (My Poem for KumoriCon) : fav.me/d7dvgte

Tell me what you think~! Feedback and comments would be wonderful~! 

However, this version is mine, so don't steal it! 
That means don't copy and paste, then say you made it!
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Given 2014-06-12
Ten Little Deviants by usagi-hikari9
This is just awesome! ( Suggested by WorldWar-Tori and Featured by ginkgografix )
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TheSkyPilot Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh you did this. You really did this. XD
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I did~. And I'm surprised with how many people liked it!
And thank ya for the fave!
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:icontheskypilot:
TheSkyPilot Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You are very welcome!
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Someone-awesome Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2015  Student Writer
Cosplaying as Britain...
Hetalia?
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
But of course~ There was also nothing else that worked and rhymed with seven....
(Thanks also for the fave, and sorry about the long time it took me to reply back~)
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Someone-awesome Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Student Writer
It's okay!
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NewNumber2 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
This is AMAZINGLY CREATIVE!
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And thank ya for the fave as well!
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NewNumber2 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2015
You're welcome!

And Then There Were None is one of the BEST books ever written!
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I bought "And Then There Were None" at an antique store a while back. I found it by coincidence actually. I haven't finished it though, even though it's really short. It's more of a novella than an actual book, but it's a pretty amazing story nonetheless. 
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NewNumber2 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2015
I think you're in for a treat in the last acts...
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Exonovus Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Am I the only one who read this and found it more gritty then funny?
Not that it's a bad thing - I prefer gritty most of the time<3
I guess it depends on the perspective you first read it in.
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*Looks up definition of gritty to make sure I'm right* 
Gritty, huh? I guess it could be, but I really don't see it. I guess the synonym of "true-to-life" fits, but I've never considered this as "gritty".
However you see it, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you gave it a fav~.
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piccusia Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so funny and nice written! :D i really had fun reading it ^^
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, thank you very much for the praise and the fave! I'm glad you enjoyed~!
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piccusia Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome! :rose:
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Alerazz501 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
Very well written, and I got a good amount of laugh from, simple and funny just the way to go. Looking forward to reading through your stuff, since you sparked myinterest. Have a nice day
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it so much!
And thank ya for the fave as well. 
If you want to read more original works, I have a separate account for it, social-shut-in
It has my newest short story and more of my older works. (The only thing it doesn't have is my RHYTHM story.)
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Alerazz501 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015
I am most glad that you recomended me to your other account, and even though I am more inclined to visual arts than poetry, your Works really speak to me and they are in a way potential source of inspiration for me, so you have my gratitude. 
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for your praise~ I'm glad I can be of some inspiration!
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HappyBlueFeathers Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I love it! :)
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you do~!
Thank ya for the fave as well~!
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HappyBlueFeathers Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
No problem :)
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thesaiyanczar Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap You deserve a cookiecookie
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay cookies~! 
Thank ya for the praise and the fave~! (And sorry it took a bit to reply!)
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thesaiyanczar Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
Np
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RinKagamineluvr Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
COSPLAYING AS BRITAINNNN XD

That's my favorite line
No just kidding, my favorite line was actually the last one. :D
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
When the last one closes their laptop?
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RinKagamineluvr Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. I don't know, it just seems like a nice way to wrap it up. :D
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I'm glad ya think so~!
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nati11184 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha it's great :'D
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank ya~
I'm send a "thank you" llama back!
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nati11184 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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CalixtoCapricorn Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I LOVE IT!!! X3
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks~ Glad you enjoyed it~!~
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CalixtoCapricorn Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! It was entertaining!
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That makes me very happy to hear~! <3
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CalixtoCapricorn Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D I'm glad~! <3
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014   General Artist
:la: congratulations!
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usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you~!~
I swear, the last thing I expected was for you to actually suggest it as a DD!
Freaking love ya~!
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014   General Artist
You're welcome :)
:giggle: they're nice on unexpected things ;)
:tighthug:
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UltimateStudios Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this is downright amazing.
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~!
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UltimateStudios Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ur welcome.
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Syrinq Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is genius ;v;
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad ya like it~!
And thank ya for the fave as well~!
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Syrinq Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem at all <33
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StarEyes26 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Holy shit! LOVE IT.
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:iconusagi-hikari9:
usagi-hikari9 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol, glad you loved it~!
Thanks for the fave~!
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MarianaErwin555 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014
I like this poem. :)
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